Aquila triumphs

The boomslang slithers from beneath the canopy of acacias, the nearest hunter in its big-eyed sights. Aquila cries out, letting his powerful talons swing forward to pluck the serpent from its thorny perch, as a group of startled magpie shrikes rise from the trees in a shrieking cloud of black and white feathers.

The snake thrashes while the eagle’s talons tighten, spearing the serpent’s skin. Ruby beads bleed across its sapphire scales and the snake slumps. Aquila spirals back to the waterhole, dropping the vanquished snake at Owab’s feet.

They will feast tonight
but the journey continues:
mauve mountains beckon.


Previous episodes of this little African adventure are here.

Photo credit: © Koshy Koshy / Flickr

Written in response to two challenges:

– Di of Pensitivity101‘s Wednesday’s Three Things Challenge – MAGPIE, OUTLET, NEAT
– Denise Farley of GirlieOnTheEdge‘s Sunday’s Six Sentence Story Word Prompt – POWERFUL

I also set myself the additional challenges of confining my piece to 100 words exactly and writing in the haibun form. Just for fun!

Click here for more Six Sentence Stories – or bring one of your own to the party!

74 thoughts on “Aquila triumphs

  1. Aquila’s talons were sure in removing the threat of the snake and turning it to a meal for Owab and co. “Ruby beads bleed” is good, and like how you inserted ‘neat’ into ‘beneath’.
    😎
    Ford

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  2. Quite a ‘tactile’ Six (as always)… life in the never-ending-here-and-now… not sure I could do it.*

    *no, my reflection, in terms of the Six you’ve written, doesn’t quiet make any sense
    ….or does it?
    lol

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